good story i guess, spellcheck major, and make it longer, what kinky stuff did they do?Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-23 13:12:30Maybe next time you should make up names because “Brother” and “sis” aren’t every realisticREADERReport 2008-01-22 17:08:53On the one hand, the others are right, this could do with a little polish, some elbow grease, and a spell checker. Porn hd Believe me, that’s higher than what i normally rate most of the stories i have read. Believe me, that’s higher than what i normally rate most of the stories i have read. There’s no need to take my advice, but i have been trying my hand at writing as well, and i find that while the first person perspective is difficult to manage at times, it feels better than a ‘watching from the sidelines’ perspective.
