To add insult to injury how can you expect to have a story read if the spelling and grammer is that poor, also the first 3 comments are constructive criticism aimed to help the author in future storiesREADERReport 2006-07-06 12:51:11i still fantasize about going cock hunting with you!READERReport 2006-07-03 17:24:33not up to your usual standard, sandi. Bokep indo 9 comments«12»READERReport 2007-09-10 17:13:10just my comment on this… To add insult to injury how can you expect to have a story read if the spelling and grammer is that poor, also the first 3 comments are constructive criticism aimed to help the author in future storiesREADERReport 2006-07-06 12:51:11i still fantasize about going cock hunting with you!READERReport 2006-07-03 17:24:33not up to your usual standard, sandi. like PATIO, FRIDGE, FRESH AIR..and I am not an anonymous poster.. it does make the story easier to read if the author has bothered to spell check the most simple words..




















