Don’t be a hyprocrite.«12» I like how you took a real life situation and expanded on it. Porn 10 comments«12»James Dylan DeanReport 2017-03-18 07:37:44Yes, you could use a proof reader. I do that too. Then so could I on my stories. I like how you took a real life situation and expanded on it. this was goodanonymous readerReport 2012-05-25 17:16:42To first commentor: Your grammar isn’t great and his is far better than yours. this was goodanonymous readerReport 2012-05-25 17:16:42To first commentor: Your grammar isn’t great and his is far better than yours. Then so could I on my stories. this was goodanonymous readerReport 2012-05-25 17:16:42To first commentor: Your grammar isn’t great and his is far better than yours. Good effort, keep writing. I like how you took a real life situation and expanded on it. I like how you took a real life situation and expanded on it. Good effort, keep writing. I like how you took a real life
