How does it sound to you? Good Luck. Big cock Writing is like everything else, practice makes perfect and if you work at it you can acheive greatness.«12» The story plot is interesting, but all the misspellings and wrong use of words was so distracting that I didn’t bother to finish the story. Take time to proofread your story. Also, after uploading it’s a good idea to edit again–to put back the spacing that was lost in the upload. Writing is like everything else, practice makes perfect and if you work at it you can acheive greatness.«12» How does it sound to you? Also, after uploading it’s a good idea to edit again–to put back the spacing that was lost in the upload. Examples: then instead of than (they actually have different meanings); “grab my hand” instead of “grabbed my hand”; “pushes me gentle back” should be “pushes me gently back”.
