try getting claire and katie in the story if u wanna describe it as incest …READERReport 2005-11-01 16:19:01u need to bring the daughter in, and archaic’s right, too choppy, it dosen’t flowREADERReport 2005-10-23 12:28:21It was kind of choppy and hard to follow. Sex video “Female, 23, brn hair, grn eyes, 5’4” 125 lbs, 34C. For all the build up, the sex scene(s?) was kind of anticlimactic. i give it a 7 .. With a bit of polishing it could pass as reasonably good.«12» but dude do write the next the story ha a lot of potential . . … He is married to a woman old enough to have an 18 yo daughter, but he slacks around the house like a 20 yo stoner. “Female, 23, brn hair, grn eyes, 5’4” 125 lbs, 34C. This probably arises from the author being 19 but trying to write about an older married couple, write what you know (or at east what you can
