if you made that far…anonymous readerReport 2010-11-26 22:44:35As I read the story I wondered if English is your first language. Eporner 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-25 23:21:29You sound like a man that is processed but certainly not one who is possessedanonymous readerReport 2012-11-12 16:26:24I have to agree with the first comment. I am well educated and well read but have never seen “Carol’ hips” or anything remotely like it.«1» Also, I don’t understand your use of possessives. I am well educated and well read but have never seen “Carol’ hips” or anything remotely like it.«1» The sentence and paragraph structure is as awkward and clumsy as mine is in Spanish and German. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-25 23:21:29You sound like a man that is processed but certainly not one who is possessedanonymous readerReport 2012-11-12 16:26:24I have to agree with the first comment.
