it has potential to be good. Big cock you just need to be more descriptive with the actual sex. it has potential to be good. It would be nice if you could give the story a kind of “natural flow”. it has potential to be good. 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-28 09:13:31I agree it dose has potenial a lot indeed the locatipn is a bit hard to imagine but keep going my love.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-14 19:26:13i like when he said put your hand in your clit while i fuck u bitchanonymous readerReport 2013-01-31 19:44:21It has potential, though you weren’t very descriptive in your language. the formatting was good and the paragraph length was good. when i open a story, i tend to look at the scroll bar for a quick reference to see how long it is before i read it.
