However, I can’t stress this enough, character description is the difference between your “transgendered” boy or your “scrawny, frail” submissive boy. Sex video Again plot is good, and the story flows alright. This is because there really is little to no description on the main character at all. What makes these other male characters what to get their rocks off on and in him? You say his body is “gender confused”. We as readers can not see what you have in your head, so as a writer it is your job to make us see it by describing what you see. However, I can’t stress this enough, character description is the difference between your “transgendered” boy or your “scrawny, frail” submissive boy. Again, description is a little better, grammar is still absolutely terrible, and I have no idea what the character, who I’m guessing is Ellen, looks like. Does that mean he has long hair, short hair,
