This ment for you or someone to better proofread your stories. Xxx video Paragraphs a little longer than should be. You still got positive vote but all the little things I mentioned might sway a critical reader to vote Negative.sabrenutReport 2020-11-05 23:00:41Anyone wanting to share their wife like that … You still got positive vote but all the little things I mentioned might sway a critical reader to vote Negative.sabrenutReport 2020-11-05 23:00:41Anyone wanting to share their wife like that … just sayin … 223 comments«12345»69nostringsReport 2023-06-30 06:27:47Definitely hot but my wife would kill before she allowed another man to touch her, let alone encourage it! Would love to share my wife like that.SilverSwanReport 2020-01-28 04:49:24Definitely hot but my old man would kill before he allowed another man to touch me, let alone encourage it!«12345» I can only wish. Some dialogue 3 people speaking in the same paragraph. A few places, you seemed to get so excited ( understandable) you left words
