I go along with all the other people that are not happy with your grammar. IF only there was a way to get in touch with you and have you send me the story, let me make corrections, then send it back to you. pornhub Find someone you trust to help you with how to lay out your paragraphs, and the prospective view of ”him, her, their, ours, we, etc. I go along with all the other people that are not happy with your grammar. Seriously the only reason it’s gettin’ such low rating marks, is it’s so totally screwed up grammar wise.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-15 10:05:28Your writing sucks. I really do like the concept of this story. With help, I hope you finish it. With help, I hope you finish it. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-19 19:46:30I agree, this has the makings of a really nice romantic story.
