That detracts from the overall enjoyment of the story. Eporner Too many jamb too much in a paragraph with several conversational dialogues that makes it difficult to follow. Too many jamb too much in a paragraph with several conversational dialogues that makes it difficult to follow. Too many jamb too much in a paragraph with several conversational dialogues that makes it difficult to follow. I especially liked the way you paragraphed dialogue & ideas. That detracts from the overall enjoyment of the story. Too many jamb too much in a paragraph with several conversational dialogues that makes it difficult to follow. That detracts from the overall enjoyment of the story. Looking forward to how the “training” progresses.«1» Too many jamb too much in a paragraph with several conversational dialogues that makes it difficult to follow.
