if you made that far…anonymous readerReport 2010-11-26 22:44:35As I read the story I wondered if English is your first language. Also, I don’t understand your use of possessives. Hindi sex 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-25 23:21:29You sound like a man that is processed but certainly not one who is possessedanonymous readerReport 2012-11-12 16:26:24I have to agree with the first comment. The sentence and paragraph structure is as awkward and clumsy as mine is in Spanish and German. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-25 23:21:29You sound like a man that is processed but certainly not one who is possessedanonymous readerReport 2012-11-12 16:26:24I have to agree with the first comment. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-25 23:21:29You sound like a man that is processed but certainly not one who is possessedanonymous readerReport 2012-11-12 16:26:24I have to agree with the first comment. if you made that far…anonymous readerReport 2010-11-26 22:44:35As I read the story I wondered if English is your first language. The sentence and paragraph structure is as awkward and clumsy as
