’nuff buildup, let’s get some of Dad’s cock in that girl…anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 19:12:55Oh well, I give A for effort to keep it going. hardcore porn Actually the short chapters work great for me because I read
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during lunch breaks on iphone. OH, IN THE 2ND OR 4TH CHAPTER?«1» ’nuff buildup, let’s get some of Dad’s cock in that girl…anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 19:12:55Oh well, I give A for effort to keep it going. So lets see if he gets to fuck all the girl on a big sleepoveranonymous readerReport 2013-04-09 18:34:57You move from past to present tense.djb8247Report 2013-04-09 17:21:11too much chatter and not enough action,taking too long to get father and daughter together,and repetious scenes,reasonable effort, score 4 out if 10anonymous readerReport 2013-04-09 15:05:08TOO SHORT OF A STORY: YOU TITILLATED ME, FINE BUT WHERE’S THE CLIMAX?
