If you’re planning to give such deeply insightful comments in the future, I suggest you learn at least basic English language syntax. – income is money coming in. Japanese sex They seem to go on about unrelated topics for too long. Please invest in a dictionary«1» They seem to go on about unrelated topics for too long. Thank you for you kind attentionanonymous readerReport 2012-05-31 22:25:25The word is outcome not income. But maybe limit the discussion of Shub-Niggurath and other philosophical subjects, considering where this is posted.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-23 15:45:38It sucked. I must admit, though, I didn’t really do a great job proofreading this work. I stopped reading so soon because u tried so hard to sound sophisticated and failed very miserably. – income is money coming in. 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-03-31 21:08:21The main thing about this, is that some paragraphs are rather long-winded. Stop writing now.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-02 13:16:45Thank you for the comment!
