You need to flesh out the charectors a little, i.e. Indian sex It was great fun.READERReport 2006-09-19 10:53:51the word is tongue-but who the hell reads these stories for spelling-great story-keep the girls happy!READERReport 2006-04-16 10:10:57Well, this was tough. It was great fun.READERReport 2006-09-19 10:53:51the word is tongue-but who the hell reads these stories for spelling-great story-keep the girls happy!READERReport 2006-04-16 10:10:57Well, this was tough. The story was very formulaic and predictable, Describing breasts as a cup size has always been a pet peave of mine. wow, their good! Sheesh…why in the fuck are so many people obsessed with getting every character in every fucking story pregnant?!?!?anonymous readerReport 2011-09-18 03:29:31You saved me a lot of hsalse just now.SequoiaReport 2008-07-02 14:40:19Keep fucking Amber and Ashley and get them both pregnant. They planned it? In some ways you have the skills, you just need a better story. It was great fun.READERReport 2006-09-19 10:53:51the word is tongue-but who the hell reads these stories for spelling-great story-keep the girls
