It had it’s chances: foot slipping off calf, causing your crutch pushing into her face; her reaching up to steady you but grabbing package (with or without hubby’s comments); wife suggestively asking hubby to “turn us on” to check the light. Indian sex 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-26 09:22:49So you get turned on (mildly) by:
1 the fact she is fit – WTF? But other then that this story is lame.«12» But other then that this story is lame.«12» But NOT by:
3 the fact that her husband is present, goading her – triple WTF? granted, i do have a fair bit, but im just wide.cajunReport 2009-08-06 07:51:21Put a chapter 2 to it and give more details and then you may have something going. I suggest you write by planning story using a story board to outline the flow, then filling in sections, finally editing for consistency, grammar and spelling
1/10 for story, + 2/10 for potential, + 1/10 for your audacity to
