78 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-13 04:09:45it was a decent start; wish you’d kept writing. Yes; there were some errors but enjoyable anywayanonymous readerReport 2011-12-27 19:46:13the plot was good except for the spelling and you need better describing, for example the dog should stay tied or knotted for about 10 minutes and would pull out, other than that it was a great story, 7/10anonymous readerReport 2011-07-01 02:36:08it was okay at the beginning but then turned to dinoshit. Indian sex neg rate for uWnatsAGoodFuckReport 2010-04-10 22:19:26this was a great story it felt sooooo good comeing to itAnonymous readerReport 2009-05-09 16:54:54very good story 7/10 more please«12345» 78 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-13 04:09:45it was a decent start; wish you’d kept writing. neg rate for uWnatsAGoodFuckReport 2010-04-10 22:19:26this was a great story it felt sooooo good comeing to itAnonymous readerReport 2009-05-09 16:54:54very good story 7/10 more please«12345» Yes; there were some errors but enjoyable anywayanonymous readerReport 2011-12-27 19:46:13the plot was good except for the spelling and you need better describing, for example the
