Mind you, most of your readers have some college education or at least a few years of being struck across their hands by an English & Grammer teacher- so they will be the first to point out your violating basic rules… I liked yyour story. Eporner But I agree in that it seemed too short. 10 comments«12»m1990Report 2016-03-13 15:34:27Love itanimal99Report 2013-03-26 22:38:43if they can’t sign their name to a comment, then they’re just bullying and not offering any real help. Mind you, most of your readers have some college education or at least a few years of being struck across their hands by an English & Grammer teacher- so they will be the first to point out your violating basic rules… if you only take the common elements of each person’s criticism of your story, you will see what you need to “fix”. Unfortunately, some people labelled your story negatively after seeing a few glaring violations and seem
