The writing was fantastic though.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-26 16:00:02Good story, wrong couple.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-26 13:29:55to be honest the imperious curse is popular in the fan fiction and it isn’t impossible for people to have the same idea is it? The imperious curse(even a fake one) is very overused and also I happened to read a lot of similar stories with the exact same scenario. Japanese sex After all writers borrow ideas from each other all the time, even Rowling.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-25 15:44:34Since Hermione is not a virgin in this story, can you write a story of her first time? Pleaseeeeee!anonymous readerReport 2011-08-25 06:57:06If you changed Harry with Draco or someone evil would be better for this kind of story. 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-08-28 11:12:35The only reason I’m giving you a negative vote is because you didn’t go for something original.
