Story #2 was just as GOOD as the first. tube8 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-03 22:01:31The story looks like its unfinished…but good story tho!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-27 11:52:23HEY! The grammar was good and the punctuation was good, too. Got yourself a proofreader? Maybe by blackmailing her not to rat her out in exchange for a life of servitude or something like that.Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-28 12:56:19u suck… You did GREAT! You did GREAT! Got yourself a proofreader? PLEASE KEEP WRITING, YOUR STORIES ARE GOOD.purbratReport 2010-03-23 02:43:17I enjoyed this story! this is a good story«123» Got yourself a proofreader? Maybe by blackmailing her not to rat her out in exchange for a life of servitude or something like that.Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-28 12:56:19u suck… Got yourself a proofreader?
