4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-28 18:47:45Good chapter but you screwed up big timeceburesReport 2012-07-20 12:23:55it is better. Big cock 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-28 18:47:45Good chapter but you screwed up big timeceburesReport 2012-07-20 12:23:55it is better. good work bouncing backAnonymous readerReport 2009-10-17 18:32:23Very good. could of took off the last part and edited this a little and it would of been awsomeAnonymous readerReport 2010-07-14 05:38:41Well you screwed the fuck up in the last one but this made up 4 it hugely. Nice twist with her having dreamed it. I think it would have been rather interesting if the battle had still occurred and Neji was made leader of the hyuga clan.«1» Nice twist with her having dreamed it. Nice twist with her having dreamed it. Nice twist with her having dreamed it. could of took off the last part and edited this a little and it would of been awsomeAnonymous readerReport 2010-07-14 05:38:41Well you screwed the fuck up in the last one but this made up
