It generally reads better. Porn Also the word [was’nt] is misspelled – try [wasn’t]!Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-20 10:57:01Wat happened 2 the twins after they were thrown aboard ?READERReport 2008-03-04 08:00:41ew…«123» You just need someone who can proofread for you. If they truly are interested in your stories, I’m sure they would be glad to help you. 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2011-07-09 13:10:48i did not get the story the sex parts were okay but needed too be more eroticAnonymous readerReport 2010-06-01 15:53:46Awsome story though wat happened to the twins and did she get killed you should do anotherAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-27 11:43:50Realy GOOD story. If they truly are interested in your stories, I’m sure they would be glad to help you. You just need someone who can proofread for you. You just need someone who can proofread for you. You just need someone who can proofread for you.
