I will surprise you with some of the things I bring into the story as some of them come from the Games I;ve played and other from reading books and my imagination. This was a good chapter, I am surprised that you made her a Daywalker, as I just assumed that you were writing based upon True Vampires. Hindi sex ‘her’ for ‘he’ and ‘lover’ for ‘love’ and several other misspellings/incorrect/left out words really take away from the reading of it.Wolf_KnightReport 2013-01-20 17:21:35I didn’t really make her a daywalker as much as she was one in the story we had played. Great story, I am very much enjoying it. I will surprise you with some of the things I bring into the story as some of them come from the Games I;ve played and other from reading books and my imagination.
