This is AWFULLY poor writing. If you insist in posting anything else, please let someone (who is literate) edit it for you prior to posting it. Porn You should finish school before you try to write. Better still, just don’t post it at all.anonymous readerReport 2013-12-01 01:30:09Bad story, don’t want to see part two until you learn how to properly differentiate between characters, describe a scene, and use punctuation.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 14:33:52″ Kendra, my wife, Beckah’s sister” this was very confusing. but I couldn’t understand why there was an ‘
But reading farther I realized Kendra was the sister.. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-18 23:59:16Cool story stop being a bunch of dick…have fun relax good job authoranonymous readerReport 2013-12-01 01:37:54Did you skip your punctuation classes entirely? but I couldn’t understand why there was an ‘
But reading farther I realized Kendra was the sister..
