The solid wall of text like you use is daunting and hard to read. XXX It would make your story much easier to read. Sue replied “Why not, Dad?”). It would make your story much easier to read. This is the generally accepted way that most writers do it.Anonymous readerReport 2013-04-12 07:29:57That is so Hot and Erotic I would have loved to been there !!anonymous readerReport 2010-08-30 09:53:00yes i have heard of girls using a snake in their cunt. I said “No way.”. Also, it would help if you learned to use quotation marks and wrote in first person (i.e. It would make your story much easier to read. 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-15 15:48:12Did you ever hear of paragraphing? 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-15 15:48:12Did you ever hear of paragraphing?
