I would suggest having someone proofread before you postDanejarousReport 2011-07-05 20:42:08I don’t know why every time I see your name on a new story I read it. Porn I am not going to tell you how you should write, but please check your work before posting. I guess a neutral vote is in order because, like I said before, you have great ideas; you just need to tell them better.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-05 20:21:01First of all, this isn’t true. Anyway, I really liked your story. keep trying! keep trying! I am not going to tell you how you should write, but please check your work before posting. keep trying! I am not going to sugar coat it; your storytelling ability is horrendous. keep trying! I would suggest having someone proofread before you postDanejarousReport 2011-07-05 20:42:08I don’t know why every time I see your name on a new story I read it.
